Qualms of Patsy

Qualms Of Patsy
Poetry Time


Poetry Time!

The world is so naive to me.
All I want is just someone to listen to me at least once..
All I need is just someone to understand me..
To tell the story of my labyrinth life.
Not everyone’s life is normal.
Not everyone’s life is tangled once in a while..
The immobile dinghy neither sink nor row.

For some, it’s never ending convoluted path,
there is no light until the end.
It’s flannel for feeble.
Braves live in the dark so,
no one never know the mettle story …

Is it so hard to give a hug?
Is it so hard to show some care?
Past was besmirched to scotch the future.
Infuriation is hushed.
The strings are affable for such a short span,
everything gets detached in no ample time..

Telepathy beams travel around the world except for some lost co-ordinates.
Every night it’s a perfect window view..
The moon & venus put me to sleep..
But, the morning starves for adrenaline,
as I am shriveled by the sun…




48 thoughts on “Qualms of Patsy

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  1. As always it is lovely to follow you and read you. What a skill!

  2. You did such a great job with this poem. I was never very good at writing them.

  3. No words Alexi! wow!!! I super love your poem, love it. Thanks a lot for sharing it with us.

  4. For some reason people thinking showing care and giving hugs and support is too hard. I do not associate myself with people like that! haha.

    1. Beautiful words. Thank you for brightening my busy day ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. Hannah Marie says:

    I really like this poem you have here. Your wording and style is amazing. Please create more of this.

  6. Aishwarya Shenolikar says:

    Reading a poem now and then is so necessary for me these days to keep in touch with my soul. This was truly beautiful!!

  7. I like how reading poetry makes one think of new ideas and can also change the way we perceive old ones.

  8. O wow I really enjoyed reading this poem! I love how you put your words together! I love reading poetry I wish I could be a poet!

  9. bmcharnley says:

    Hey! It’s National Poetry Month! I love poetry so much. Thanks for sharing this one!!!

  10. I wish I was as gifted as you. Unfortunately I’m not good at expressing my self with words.

  11. Monique Starks says:

    Love your poetry. Very beautiful. Thank you for sharing pieces of yourself with us.

  12. You did such a great job with this poem! it’s not everyday that I get to read poetry as much as I would like to. This one was so good! Thanks for sharing!

  13. Thank for sharing such an informative and comprehensive poem. It’s really good. and keep up the good work

  14. Neil Alvin Nicerio says:

    Nice poem. It’s a bit deep but has nice feels in it.

  15. I liked reading the poem. Poetry is an art and you sure are very talented.

  16. modlphotography says:

    Great poem. Thank you for sharing.

  17. I love how the words were put together. Such a lovely piece! I just wish I’m as gifted as you are ๐Ÿ˜‰

  18. Wow what a great poem, you have a real talent for this! I love how you write, can;’t wait to read more!

  19. Elena Toma says:

    I love poetry time! Poetry makes us have deeper feelings and soul.Poetry comes from the highest happiness or the deepest sorrow.

  20. Eileen M Loya says:

    You are so gifted. I do write poetry sometimes but none as good as yours! You truly write from the heart.

  21. You set a very powerful mood with this poem – from the longing for someone to listen to the shriveled by the sun. I like that in-between there are notes of hope and energy. It’s not easy, but it’s not all hopeless – or so it seems to me.

  22. Alexandra Cook says:

    What a beautiful poetry. You always amaze me with your passion in writing. I enjoyed reading your blog and can’t wait to read more of your poetry,

  23. Anna de Nord says:

    I have to tell you’re gifted โ™ฅ I’ve read some of your poems and liked them a lot )) They are simple but emotional and touching!

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